So today I had my essay proposal back and a small short tutorial about it and my tutor had written a few notes around my written words. The first things mentioned is that I need to make a clear decision on what Title I want to go for. I need to choose one, or combine them both and the other question she wrote along the side and have a mix question.
I think I will probably go for the question that my tutor wrote a long the edge and interpret the question through my two possible titles too; how has deadpan become a recognised type of photography? I will probably have a changed title similar to this one just written.
I always worry about essay's as they are certainly my weakest point in theory. I tend to not reference properly and need constant checks foe help. Here below shoes a note to read Michael Fried's book and a note that also says that I need to explain what I mean even further, and to talk about the subjective.
I have more notes that signify that I need to explore and discuss further some of the points that I have made throughout this proposal essay. I also need to need to explain hows certain parts of the essay are used and how it fits into my work topic.
And lastly, I was advised to use the Dusseldorf school of photography book, and also the Michael Fried book, just because they are both books with big chunks of great information and the books consist of a top photographers at the that particular time, a lot of research containing a lot of work towards almost of of my original idea.
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